Tutor feedback on my original Assignment 5 submission said that it did not show a ‘clear sense of development through the sequence.’ I agree and therefore decided to completely reshoot the assignment. This time I decided to shoot the final visit my family made to my late sister’s house in the Cotswolds. I shot in the style of Elina Brotherus’s ‘Les femmes de la maison Carre’ featuring my mother’s final visit to her daughter’s lifelong home. The ‘clear sense of development through the sequence’ is as my mother walks around the house room to room. To me her pain is evident.
‘The women of the house’